Serena sends words out into the blogosphere, and gets feedback!

So today the "first page" of my book was featured on First Impressions, which is a recurring critique post created by the talented Dianne K. Salerni and Marcy S. Hatch.  Both are seasoned writers, and full of really useful and constructive advice.  On the first M/W/F of every month, they critique the first 300-350 words [...]